Literary Quest - - ion

Good morning, Gentlemen. I'm writing Highway 9 this morning. (Very proud of myself. I got up at 7:30 and I don't work until noon!) I am hoping for a little feedback from ALL THREE OF YOU. No, you haven't read a single word of my book, but my last few posts are written in the same style. MOST of them are, probably. You're about to read, or have just read, "Light Bulbs Cultivated..." and that is essentially written in the same style as Highway 9.

In my introduction I announce that Highway 9 will be written in 'the language of my natural thought.' Of course it will be edited and revised and I'll have more time later to substitute words and expound upon the thesis, but mostly, what you have read on the Blog is going to be close to what will be read in Highway 9. Especially the speed and voice of it. My question to you guys is this: "Is it readable?" Do you understand what I'm writing? I have a hard time telling myself that what I'm penning in scribbles will ever be understood. I read it back and laugh a little and muse, but do you?

Thanks bros.
Mungo

PS, ST, does Beck still read the blog? Perhaps she has input too?